Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend more money on improving access to the Internet than on public transportation
The benefits of technology, such as the internet and public transportation, are numerous, making life more comfortable and enjoyable. In this regard, a highly controversial topic arose that the government should invest in the internet, a successful today’s technology that people have gotten used to, or spend money on public transportation, aptly related to the prosperity of society. I believe the internet is the sixth sense, without which you cannot use the other five. The internet is tied to other technology, and it is almost impossible to progress in science and technology without it.
In universities, professors and students search on the thousand pages to learn new science. This progress caused an improvement in technology and, consequently, the welfare of people. Children and adolescents use it for education and entertainment. For instance, during Covid19, epidemic started in 2019, people were quarantined. In this situation, classes became online and teachers communicated with students over the internet, employees worked remotely also people stayed informed of each other through social networks. Unlike the other epidemics in history, not only did it not interfere with daily activities, but helps scientists to find vaccines to over it. Therefore, we all are in debt to the initial investment the government made in the internet years ago.
Over the past decade, transportation predominantly made its progress and is stable as a matter of infrastructure. This industry is growing every day, and we are witnessing its accomplishment and its impact on the daily life of humans. This evidence shows that investment in the internet brings profits funded for other requirements in every society, such as transportation, a fundamental structure of every economy.
However, investing in novel idea cause undoubted risk, but the risk is the primary challenge in every bargain. Since the internet relates to the recent century, some may think that it took risks for the government to spend money to improve this technology. This group focuses on benefits that transportation may not mention the transportation industry started centuries ago, and man has made progress in this field. So maybe it will be like pounding water in a mortar.
In conclusion, I would like to mention that the internet is the top profitable industry in the world. As economists declare:” investors should spend their money on an economic process until its investment value chart gradually increases” therefore, it would be an opportunity to drive benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45226130653 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13742140063 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550251256281 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.515358393 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184549667273 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499075238761 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498666949403 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993903839652 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519276825458 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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