Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Grandparents cannot give useful advice to their grandchildren because the world of today and the world of 50 years ago are too different.
In today's modern and sophisticated world, consulting with experienced one plays a vital role in people's success. In this connection, each person has own experienced and guides in a specific way. Although contested by many that the matter of advising grandparents is highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded as both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I concur with the notion that it can be a plus to consult with grandparents.
First, grandparents are proficient consultants as the major problems in one's life pertain to ethical issues, which are the same as fifty years ago. To be more specific, people all around the world face many obstacles in their lives, which can be solved by behaving in a specific way. Grandparents are expertise because they have lived longer than grandchildren and contend with many same challenges before. According to my own experience, I had a serious contention with my girlfriend. After I confirmed my grandfather about this argument, he convinced me that there are many severe difficulties in one's life, which can be solved by being patient and reasonable. Therefore, he encourages me to talk with her instead of showing aggressive behavior; by doing so, I could maintain my relationship with her successfully.
Second, grandparents are competent in advising grandchildren because they have insight into their family's talents. To elucidate, children have the same skills as their parents do; thus, they will become thriving in their lives if they realize and develop their abilities. For example, when my sister decided to choose a major, my grandfather told him it would be a great boon for her if he studied music since all of my uncles and my father are gifted musicians. Therefore, my sister has accepted his advice and has studied in a music major. She is a skillful piano player, so much so that she is designated to play the piano for the important ceremony. Moreover, as she is talented in the musical field, she has learned quickly, so she has an ideal opportunity to practice more content in less time than her classmates do.
To conclude, while there are several arguments on each side, I profoundly believe that consulting with grandparents has several advantages. Not only do grandparents advise in ethical issues proficiently, but they also know about children's skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12435233161 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00905592641 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572538860104 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.98381361 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.888888889 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164365149894 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538733976783 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420486333188 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986031954884 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210989695988 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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