do you agree or disagree with the following statement? if people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job thet would be more satisfying. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, Careers is the most important part of humans life and have a vide effect on the quality of life. Among this, choosing an appropriate job can change our lifestyle. Some people believe that the job is merely is a way for earning money but others think people past a great part of their life at work, therefore, they choose their careers carefully. Personally, I believe that we have to select our job with obsessing and satisfactory work is very integral. I have 2 reasons which i will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, people should have a high level of satisfaction about their occupation in order to work very well without tiredness. It is true that earning money is very important but all of the jobs are not money. The important impact of working on humans is mindset thriving because during work time we had other activities like communications and learning. If work is not satisfactory, we can not focus on the other side of the job and it has a lot of bad effects on our mine, for example, it can make people very tired physically and emotionally.
Secondly, enjoyable working is an important cause of our work-life pinakale.
people who are very successful in their job really enjoy their work, on the other hand, they do a lot of effort to do their job very well also, because of the effect of the job they have better day and they have a more successful family life too. for instance, my father was in love with his career and he did his job very well. after a short period of time, he makes the company very successful and he earns more among his colleagues. Additionally, he was not tired emotionally after his work and he persuaded us to choose our future careers deliberately.
In conclusion, I think working with enthusiasm is the key to our success because we enjoy our work and because we do everything to thrive in our occupation without tiredness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63313609467 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67159599494 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48224852071 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3702897273 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 5.45110844103 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157839794215 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625827071397 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515394864301 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843980595145 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612438307096 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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