Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A controversial issue relating to whether people should live in one city for their entire life or move from one community to another has been brought to the attention of the public. Relevant authorities are urged that families are expected to reside in one place all the time rather than making a move to another town. From a personal point of view, the above statement is agreeable for some reasons as below.
To begin with, living in a specific location for years means that individuals would be well aware with everything around them. To be more specific, citizens would be acquainted with each road, site, building of the city if they could live in this town for decades since they may have been in every part of the city themselves. In this case, residents could go anywhere they want in conversant place without being lost or asking help from other neighbors. Moreover, with staying in one site for a long time, they would enjoy a lot of palatable local site with family members on the weekend instead of always eating the usual food. On the contrary, if people move house to a totally unfamiliar place, they would experience a tough time because they have no idea about their surroundings, such as how to arrive at their destination or where to buy something they need. Therefore, residing in a location all the time would be easier for families than removing house to a strange situation.
What is more, staying at one town for years would give individuals a chance to enjoy a treasured time with their friends and neighbors. It is widely acknowledged that humans should be better contact with friends or families frequently, which would facilitate their physical and mental development. Citizens would possess a number of intimate friends and close neighbors when they could stay in one place for a long period of time. They would have entertainment together as well as help each other. Under these circumstances, residents could spend a happier life throughout life in this place along with the company of companions. For example, before I was eighteen, I had been in my hometown where there were plenty of familiar classmates and friends. I spent a pleasant time with them and this experience becomes the most precious thing in my life.
Finally, moving house from one to another distant location would be much painstaking since people have to shift lots of articles of daily use to a different place, which not only wastes time but also disuses energy. From what was discussed above, citizens should better not to shift their house to a remote site.
To sum up, from what has been discussed above, families should remain in a city throughout their life for the reason that they would know well everything related to them and own an unforgettable memory with kinsfolk.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...they could stay in one place for a long period of time. They would have entertainment together...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2308.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8487394958 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56780103332 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510504201681 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.7704739771 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.473684211 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0526315789 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223500978245 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802767358044 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580202394239 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154238157931 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800743073791 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.