Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A controversial issue relating to whether people should live in one city for their entire life or move from one community to another has been brought to the attention of the public. Relevant authorities are urged that families are expected to reside in one place all the time rather than making a move to another town. From a personal point of view, the above statement is agreeable for some reasons as below.
To begin with, living in a specific location for years means that individuals would be well aware of everything around them. To be more specific, citizens would be acquainted with each road, site, building of the city if they could dwell this town for decades since they may have been in every part of the urban center themselves. In this case, residents could go anywhere they want in a conversant place without being lost or asking for assistance from other neighbors. Moreover, while inhabit on one site for a long time, they would enjoy a lot of palatable local gourmet food with family members instead of always eating the insipid diet. On the contrary, if people move house to a totally unfamiliar place, they would experience a tough time because they have no idea about their surroundings, such as how to arrive at their destination or where to purchase desired merchandise. Therefore, residing in a location all the time would be easier for families than removing houses into a strange situation.
What is more, staying in one burgh for years would give individuals a chance to enjoy a treasured time with their friends and neighbors. It is widely acknowledged that humans should have better contact with fellows or families frequently, which would facilitate their physical and mental development. Citizens would possess a number of intimate companions and close neighbors when they could stay in one surrounding for a long period of time. They would have entertainment together as well as help each other. Under these circumstances, residents could own a gorgeous life throughout life in this place along with the company of companions. For example, before I was eighteen, I had been in my hometown where there were plenty of familiar classmates and friends. I had a pleasant time with them and this experience became the most precious thing in my life.
Finally, moving house from one to another distant location would be much painstaking since people have to shift lots of articles of daily use to a different place, which not only wastes time but also disuses energy. From what was discussed above, citizens should better not shift their house to a remote site.
To sum up, from what has been discussed above, families should remain in a city throughout their life for the reason that they would know environment well related to them and own an unforgettable memory with kinsfolk.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ould stay in one surrounding for a long period of time. They would have entertainment together...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2336.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92827004219 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62826187973 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537974683544 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7179312144 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.947368421 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9473684211 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21052631579 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208494414368 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742103293712 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588778930877 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146677196015 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839747483706 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.