Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowaday, due to the complexietis of the world where we live, and in odere to survive the situation, most of people are supposed to change their location to have access to better opportunities. The controversial question which arises here is whether, living in one town is better that moving from one place to another. When it comes to me, it is my firm conviction that moving from one city to another have some advantages for people and is the better approach. To suppport this, there are several reasons two of which are going to be aptly explored in the following.
First and foremost, the most prominent reason which comes to my mind is that, living in different towns provides a person with the opportunity to meet a lot of people, initiate contact with them, establish rapports, and make new friendship. As a result, one can enlarge her or his circle of friendship, and also improve her social skills by socializing with different people with different thinking caps. For example, a couple of years ago, me and my family changed our living city from Babol to Tehran. This provided me to socialize with different people in my new city, as a result, now i have more friends and enjoy my companionship with all of them. Had we stayed in the same city, I would have not been able to have a large number of friends.
Furthermore, another noteworthy reason that should be taken into account is that, different cities have different demanding, so there is a variation in type of jobs will be found in a city from the other one. Attending in different cities provide a person with different job opportunities and give him the chance to experience different activites, as a result he can recognize better his weakness, strengths, threats and opportunitis, and will end up doing a job which is best fit for him. In consequence of having a good job, he feel a sense of achievment which is an immense asset. Take my personal experience as a compelling example; as I mentioned above, a couple of years ago, we changed our town, so it gave me the chance to attend different jobs. By experiencing jobs which differ from that I had in my previous city, I acknowledged about my abilities, and also my requirement of my career; as a result, I landed the one which is the most appropriate for me and give me the sense oof self-satisfaction.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the fact that, moving from one city to another give people the opportunity to live better lives. The fact that they can have new friends and improve their social skills, coupled with broadening their perspective about the most appropriate career for them by attending to different jobs, is the reason which strengthens my claim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... and in odere to survive the situation, most of people are supposed to change their location t...
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Line 2, column 721, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ity, I would have not been able to have a large number of friends. Furthermore, another notewort...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...In consequence of having a good job, he feel a sense of achievment which is an immen...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, then, for example, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72151898734 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82686881721 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474683544304 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6087397493 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.875 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1971852743 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845193864127 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824248276114 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155297903872 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561446185194 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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