Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Without a shadow of a doubt, we can either live in a single city all our lifetime or change our living place many times. The point here is to choose the way that makes us more successul. While some people think it is preferable idae to stay in a city lifelong, it is my firm conviction that moving from cities will have countless positive effects on people. In what follows, I will thoroughly elucidate what rationale my perspective is based on.
The first and foremost reason is that we can create more job opportunities by being connected with different cities. It is an indisputable fact that cities are different from each other and each has an unique condition. As a result, there are clearly sometimes that one may face financial challenges, while other cities are flourishing economically. In this conditions, it is better for us to move to the places offering employment. Take my own experience as a compelling example. ten years ago, the city where I was born was in huge trouble because of the unexpected severe weather conditions. Consequently, many businesses were going to cut off their workers. Therefore, I decided to come to the capital city, aiming to find a better vocation. Actually it was a wise decision, which caused a monumental change in my life, including several positive effects. if I had not changed my living city, I would have not be able to not only find a job but also make a living.
The second pivotal and vindicating ground that I should mention is that each city has its own beauties. Rarely could I find a city without anything intersting. Thus, I strongly believe we should try to experience most of the amazing and distinctive places in the country. In this line of thought, it is a superior notion to live in at least four or five towns in our lives. By being and staying in different cities we will gain a great deal of precious knowledge that will help us to be more successful in our professional lives. For instance, my uncle is a man who has lived in many cities in our country. Accordingly, he has confronted huge amount of challenges that have made him a wise man who has practical solutions for any problem. Futhermore, if anyone asks him for possible recommendations about their difficulties, he will help him effectively.
What's more, I think the development of transportation industry has also made it easier than at any time in history to move between citites. With this in mind, since we can inexpensively travel in a short time, we will never miss our friends and family members too.
To put it in a nutshell, in my opinion, moving between town and even countries has numerous benefits, which outweigh its drawbacks.

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Average: 9.3 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, consequently, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, for instance, i think, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2208.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72805139186 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84502432187 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552462526767 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6441832406 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.32 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.68 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141681459558 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360374248193 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307275129994 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745405725938 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295017130482 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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