Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In this progressive and sophisticated world today, people need to move from one place to another due to many important reasons. Without moving to different places, one is unlikely to become a successful person. Although many people prefer to stay in one place all their lives, I, personally, like to move to different areas. I feel this way for two important reasons that I will analyze more throughout this essay.
First and foremost, people can experience different situations and become familiar with other cultures by moving to various places. My own experience is a compelling example that can drive this notion home. When I was 18, I decided to go to a university in another city. At first, it was hard for me to live far away from my family. But after months, I totally could see significant growth in me, resulting from getting used to different cultures and people. I've learned new things every day that became handy for me later in life. This example demonstrates how moving to multiple places can lead to personal improvements.
Secondly, changing the living environment can prevent people from getting depression. More specifically, changing the environment can directly improve mental health status. There is always a high chance of getting depression by being steady, leading to a significant decrease in life quality. For example, one of my friends experienced a depressing period in her life. When she visited her psychologist, she found out that her emotions had changed due to the cold weather in our city. as a result, she decided to move to a warmer place, which obviously changed her mood. If she had not moved to another place, she would never have been able to change her mental status.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that not only can moving help people understand many cultures and life situations, but it can also help them stay away from depression and mental issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96865203762 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72498372576 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576802507837 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4082921202 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4210526316 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179852206972 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579631899021 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400628524228 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106982695065 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450615189082 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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