Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It goes without saying that human kind has always been in seek of a more convenient situation to live and raise a family. Personally, I believe though it might be easier to stay in one place, it is sometimes unavoidable and to make an improvement in life, moving is an urge. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, we don't pick our hometown or family. It is up to chance that in what kind of place we get born. To be more specific, we are not all equally lucky to be born in a country or town that we wish for. Plus, it is not so rare that we can't conform a place customs or rules, even if we spend a great portion of our life there . Thus, despite the fact that it might be out of so many people's safe zone, moving to change a situation we are dissatisfied with, would become an obligation. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I was born and raised in Iran. Although, there are some aspects of this country which I admire, there are some sort of stringent rules and economy crisis that I can't stand in any way. Therefore, immigration is imposed on me by the current situation.
Another reason that is worth mentioning is that by staying in the same place we get less enthusiastic for new and novel adventures. People who lead a sedentary life style are less exposed to new experiences and people. Additionally, as individuals get older, they become less social and would feel overwhelmed if they find themselves in a new situation. As a result, I strongly believe that people should get the opportunity to make new acquaintances while they are young. Plus, it would be a great boon for their future. Moreover, living in different places would give us the edge to see assortment of traditions and traits, thus it broaden our perspective and make us more open mind. For instance, I left my country to study at France. Although, I knew myself as an introverted person and was totally terrifies for meeting new people, I made lots of friends who I am still in touch with. So after this experience I realized that I was not an aloof, I just needed to give myself a chance and get the courage to meet new people and find common interests with them.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the world is a big place and it would be so implausible if we limit ourselves to a specific place while we can try new things and enhancing our lives by moving to other places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38189845475 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6014558672 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520971302428 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4741981339 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2272727273 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5909090909 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22727272727 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110261055903 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301859937423 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295960582579 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766807650689 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204668502251 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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