Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
It is axiomatic that in this progressive and sophisticated world where we live, human beings experience a wide range of lifestyle during their life. For some reason may people have to change their cities in order to find new opportunities and continue their life. While some people hold the opinion that living in a town or city is for all life is better, on the other hand, many individuals believe that mankind needs to change life place during a lifetime. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former opinion, and the reasons to support my idea are presented in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that citizens might suffer from different difficulties during their life in which caused by the cities that they live there. In fact, expansion of urban life will face people with a lot of problems such as air pollution, traffic congestion, and high taxes to name but a few. According to these difficulties which make by urban life, some individuals won't endure living in big cities, so they prefer to move into small cities to flee mentioned demanding situations. My personal experience will bring this notion home. A few years ago, my family and I lived in the capital city which was so crowded, and also we suffered from industrial pollution made by chemical factories, located in proximity to our house. Since my father had a lethal disease that destroys his respiratory system, and also he suffered from an aristerocelesis, doctors suggested us to leave the city. We decided to move into a country-side to use fresh air and healthy vegetables and fruit. After a few years, my father's ill became better and all of us had a better feeling so we decided to live in the town for all time. Ultimately, this example demonstrates change the living place will solve crucial problems.
Moreover, due to the fact that big cities most of the time have better conditions and equipment for life, people can transfer their life to a big city in order to take advantage of the invaluable situations of urban life. In fact, If a person wants to continue studies or enter to a highly prestigious university, he or she will move to a developing city, since many educational institutions are located in urban areas. Not only can young people take advantage of participating in a preciously academic place but also they will find a golden opportunity to be hired in the best companies. Because most of the tremendous firms are located in big cities, and also they have offices in these cities. As a result, youngsters have not problem in finding a suitable job.
In conclusion, having the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I di believe that changing the living place is necessary for humans. Because they can relieve themselves from the difficulties of living in big cities, and also they can find opportunity to continue their studies and occupy big companies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (di) must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...reasons and examples into account, I di believe that changing the living place is neces...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2413.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85513078471 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77227659727 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501006036217 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8033480892 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.65 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.85 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210213988836 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641904474183 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522889059722 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129405216344 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558421858355 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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