Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
It is axiomatic that in this progressive and sophisticated world where we live, human beings need to reduce their tension and keep calm since different problems and difficulties exist in life. While many people believe that to decrease the tension and stress in life the most useful method is to be alone, on the contrary, some others hold the opinion that being alone is not the most effective way. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former statement, and the reasons to support my idea are presented in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that since many individuals experience a hectic life these days, they could not allocate their time to take rest and spend time with themselves. In fact, nowadays, employees work from dawn to dusk. In their office, they have to manage their relations with others and control their conflict with their co-workers. So it is crucial for them to give up this condition in order to relax. If they spend their time lonely, they find a golden opportunity to learn valuable skills such as computer software and activities like horticulture. My own experience brings this notion of home. A few years ago, I worked for a telecommunicating company in which the famous and high prestigious in our country. Although I gained a huge amount of money in this firm I suffered from the lack of opportunities to be alone since I had to keep in touch with my co-workers to keep up our projects. So I decided to give a consultant from a psychologist; he suggested that I quit my job and find a new one to work only half a week. In this situation, I could focus on my own in my free time so I decided to learn to play tennis which was a useful means to me to reduce my stress.
Moreover, nowadays due to the advancement of technology many people could communicate with each other easily and conveniently. Moreover, many firms provide a situation for their employees in order to work in a group. So because of these aforementioned facts, contemporary lifestyle quenches our thirst to keep in touch with other people. To reduce tensions and problems in daily life, individuals can take advantage of starting a journey alone. In this vein, take a trip lonely could help to spend your time without any worries in order how to contact with other people. For instance, if a person organizes travel not only could relief from a hectic life but also it brings about the alive and vigorous feeling. Ultimately, staying alone through a trip is totally helpful for everyone to forget difficulties in daily life.
In conclusion, having the mentioned reasons and points into account, I do believe that dedicate time to be alone in order to decrease the stress is beneficial. Because it aids people to learn a new skill, and also by taking a trip alone individuals could reduce their tensions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ith each other easily and conveniently. Moreover, many firms provide a situation for the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2345.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71830985915 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75254156505 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496981891348 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 750.6 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6789486037 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.590909091 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5909090909 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13636363636 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194090161584 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513081208587 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466044703869 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124496694103 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026821478603 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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