Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to spend your money on an object that will last a long time than it is to spend your money on an experience (such as a vacation, concert, etc.) that will last only a short time. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The earth we live on it is very important part of our life. it is where we can survive and spend all of time of our life. some people belive that the earth is being damaged by human activity. others disagree. In my view, human activities can impact to the earth significantly for two important reasons.
The first is some activities would made pollution to the earth. if human activities harm to air of the Earht seriously, anyone can not live easily-espicially humans. For example, when I used to live in tehran, where it had the best climate in Iran, my relatives came to my home from other city because they enjoyed of the weather in tehran. Most of citizens used of bicycle to go to thier work. After then, people in other province began to migrate to there due to not only increased population, but also city became greater than in the past. Over time, townsmans needed to move faster and more transportation vehicle, so governmet is forced by this events to allowed new vehicles from other countries. sadly, number of cars and motorbike increase and city make pollution. if they did not migrate in tehran, this place might be healthy. Unfurtunately, the weather became dangerous for all of public, especially old people and chidrens. Forthermore, when air pollute by car exhaust, temperature of air increase extreme that this happen could extinct existence. As you can see, human activies could harm to the earth.
Second, the earth is being change enivornment by using a lot of weapons. if every country use diffirent weapons again and again, the earth will annihilate completely. For instance, I read a article about nuclear weapons that it had shown a lot of effects. this weapon could perish life of creatures and also power of destruction of this weapons is very deathlike. At first time, the united state applied this weapon in japan where destroyed thoroughly. sadly, half of plant of there made infection extremely wherever might not cultivate anything and people starve because lack of food. if the united state had used nuclear weapon, people in japan would not have suffered years. Astonishingly, this publication mentioned that the earth will discompose only 5 minutes if all of weapons apply at once. this article taught me, some of activities can influence on the earth badly.
In sum, the earth is harmed by human activities. human activities not only pollute the Eath, but also change environment significantly. we all should be careful about sort of our activities.
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...s. The first is some activities would made pollution to the earth. if human activi...
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...ties would made pollution to the earth. if human activities harm to air of the Ear...
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... they enjoyed of the weather in tehran. Most of citizens used of bicycle to go to thier work. Af...
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... also change environment significantly. we all should be careful about sort of our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, for example, for instance, sort of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92636579572 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70576033937 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522565320665 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3513523397 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8148148148 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5925925926 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18518518519 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.85842293907 441% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0623651625193 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176094542202 0.076458572812 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260841087738 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0365624237538 0.150856017488 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143707792881 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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