Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
information is an essential part of our daily life. Nowadays, various events occur throughout the world that individuals need to follow different news resources to become informed about all circumstance. Some people believe that everyone should use of any news resources to acquire information, however, others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, numerous news resources help to anyone to obtain more information and become well-informed, for noticeable reasons.
The main reason is that people inform a lot of secret facts when use diverse news resources. Unfortunately, governments restrict news resources that give revealing information about corruption. however, with arrival modern apparatus communication, government leaders fail to limit news, and gradually, weaknesses management of governments through various news media exhibit to society. Therefor, person benefit from great news resources and become well-informed. For example, statistics show that societies don't have individual's well-informed can not progress. In Third world countries, governments try to prevent expose special information about their debility, flaw, and incapacity governing different issues in order to community members do not protest. As a results, people would not recognize these weakness because of lack of various news resources, and so governments will follow their own goals. As you can see, individuals should use any type news resources to attain more information.
The another reason is that using any way news resources help people to distinguish valid information. any news resource cover selective information under supervision states. In other words, individuals should investigate all news resources to be informed from community status. In most countries there are many news resources that inform people, but a little resources give accurate information. Particulary, media that belong governments may broadcast fault data in order to change individual's thought. Although a few unknowing person who use limited media believe any type information, but most of people have knowledge to apply new news resuorces to contrast datas and get more valid information. For instance, in my countries, government leaders try to defraud ignorant people to rule for many years. however, with expanding the Internet, individuals by using Telegram and Facebook can get more information about fake information. This experience teach me that everybody should use a lot lof news resources to become well-informed.
In conclusion, people by using innumerable news media and resources to obtain more data because not only be informed secret information, but also recognize valid information. person should not depend on a few news resources, if they want to become more well-informed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...to community members do not protest. As a results, people would not recognize these weakn...
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Message: Did you mean 'this weakness' or 'these weaknesses'?
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...media believe any type information, but most of people have knowledge to apply new news resuor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, third, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2379.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80243902439 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08343716832 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514634146341 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0595493214 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.434782609 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8260869565 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65217391304 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257587014995 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904114863932 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409484435572 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182095198335 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313055067802 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.06 10.9000537634 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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