Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed
material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet. Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer?
In my view, usage online or electronic material such as website, pdf, online article is better of everyone especially academic application. Nowadays usage of this material is common for students because of elaboration of technologies, knowledge, hectic life style, and etc. my reasons to support my opinion as follows:
First of all, many of students in high schools, university demand to different resources that is not available. nowadays, many of old printed versions such as books, journals, newspaper, maps are not available for who need for research, while electronics versions of it accessible for students. Librarians saved precious version of old books, maps, article at their archives but prepared imagery versions of them by advanced scanner on library’s website.
Secondly, with recent hoard of information and knowledge it is very difficult and time-consuming for researcher to find demanded info from library or printed materials. We can search and find our demands with some typing or with some wink at every parts of world that similar to allied network.
Thirdly, residents of earth encounter with environmental issue such as lake of trees and green landscape. I believe that using of online materials is helpful for survive trees for building paper. Maybe everyone known that for creation of paper needs many of trees while this green manufacture implemented such lung to refinement of earth’s contaminations.
Last but not least, we can save a lot of books, article, maps and others in less bulk such as hardware, flash and we able to portable to everywhere of send online to everyone. Today, librarians construct powerful server and set up plethora of online versions for academics user to find their needs of website’s library.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...nologies, knowledge, hectic life style, and etc. my reasons to support my opinion as fo...
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Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., hectic life style, and etc. my reasons to support my opinion as follows: Firs...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ferent resources that is not available. nowadays, many of old printed versions such as b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36200716846 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96060819059 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620071684588 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4331257586 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879662133355 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333005977623 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242651896534 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458532148261 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214167826499 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.