Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed
material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet. Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today there are lots of resources available to use in various purposes. Some students prefer to use internet as a base for their searching method, meanwhile most of the students choose published sources as their base of exploration. I personally believe that using hard materials such as books and articles is much better than using internet.
First of all, information existed in books and articles are much reliable. Whenever a book is in publishing threshold, it’s contains are fully and wholly evaluated by the scientist and governmental official. On the contrary, there is no guarantee for the resources found across the internet to be reliable and to have academic value, for every person can manipulate its content in her/his desire. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Last semester I was assigned to fulfill a project, and I started searching in internet and found many amazing sources appeared to be scientific. Although I presented it successfully, I got few scores. When I asked my professor for giving me low number, he replied me that your resources were not faithful, and due to that case you got low scores.
Secondly, instructions available in books and articles are much detailed as compared to instructions found in internet. When you open a book and investigate something, you will absolutely counter to treasures of data about your specific issue. In addition, books and articles are written in appropriate methods of academic hollow of tiny simples of punctuation and grammar errors. My own experience is a good example of this. Two weeks ago I was supposed to present a presentation before the class. I started digging in the internet to accumulate information for my presentation, but unfortunately after several days searching in internet, I didn’t found much points about. So I took a book from library and it was full of information I extremely need. Consequently, I presented my orientation excellent and got a high score.
Thirdly, printed materials such as books and articles are easily available in any library, but searching in internet requires accessing to net, laptop or smart phone. If you don’t have any activated net bundle, how can you have access to net and searching in? Libraries have a particular location and whenever we need we can go and search. My own brother used to use his smartphones for searching his assignments. One day his net bundle was finished, but he couldn’t reactivate it, so he became very upset. I took him to the nearest library, and there he accomplished his duties.
In the conclusion, all the academics and professors accept only printed facts and meaningful evidences. I extremely suggest try to use printed resources rather than internet resources because details in books and articles are much trustworthy correspondence to internet and because books and articles have much detail data and because printed substances are easily accessible and don’t require net or other things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 661, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...rching in internet, I didn't found much points about. So I took a book from lib...
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Line 9, column 421, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...don't require net or other things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in addition, such as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2517.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18969072165 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02386019366 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513402061856 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 801.0 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8549488356 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8076923077 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6538461538 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218705797825 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601165886445 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789272893435 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138913315927 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747385077914 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.