Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed
material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet. Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer?
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<p class="MsoNormal">In my view, usage online or electronic material such as website,
pdf, online article is better for everyone, especially academic applications.
Nowadays usage of this material is common for students because of elaboration
of technologies, knowledge, hectic life style, and etc. my reasons to support my opinion as follows:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">First of all, many students in high schools, universities demand different
resources that are not available. nowadays, many of old printed versions such
as books, journals, newspaper, maps are not available for who need for
research, while electronics versions of it accessible for students. Librarians
saved precious version of old books, maps, article at their archives but prepared
imagery versions of them by advanced scanner on library’s website. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Secondly, with the recent hoard of information and knowledge, it is
very difficult and time-consuming for the researcher to find demanded info from
the library or printed materials. We can search and find our demands with some
typing or with some wink at every part of the world that similar to an allied
network.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Thirdly, residents of earth encounter an environmental issue such
as the lake of trees and green landscape. I believe that using online materials
is helpful for surviving trees for building paper. Maybe everyone known that
for the creation of paper needs many of trees while this green manufacture
implemented such a lung to refine of earth’s contaminations.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Last but not least, we can save a lot of books, articles, maps and
others in less bulk such as hardware, flash and we able to portable to
everywhere of sending online to everyone. Today, librarians construct powerful
servers and set up a plethora of online versions for academics users to find
their needs for the website’s library.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">In concluding, using online versions of materials is very portable,
time-effective, low-cost, environmentally friendly. Everyone should know the
advantage of the application of this kind of material <o:p></o:p></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, kind of, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2292.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.98780487805 4.8611393121 144% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.31224879066 2.67179642975 274% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588414634146 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.51630824373 125% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.813659264 48.9658058833 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.363636364 100.406767564 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 29.8181818182 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.53405017921 684% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0605930783781 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291772516628 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021318926977 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0192206108425 0.150856017488 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257417132731 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 11.7677419355 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.66 58.1214874552 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.85 10.9000537634 219% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.01818996416 128% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.