Imagine that you are going to visit a new city, which one of the following ways do you think is the best way to know the city in a short time?
Visit historic sites
Go to shops and markets
Enjoy the restaurant and spend time in cafe
Nowadays, the traveling is one of the interesting and exciting activity for release the tension, become acquainted with different culture and food. Each city would have a varity of restaurant, recreational center, cultural place, shop center and mall that will attract city’s residents and tourist or trsveler to them. Whenever I would going to a new city, It is more appealing for me to visit historical sites such as moumentom and status, palace and castle. I will elaborate my reasons for following reasons.
first and foremost, Every city and location would have some unique and exclusive historical place to pay attention and visit. In my viewpoint historical sites have is distinctive and characteristic properties that words fail to describe ithem.
Also, There are some advantage for seeing historical or ancient sites such as a sense of nostalgia, connection to the past, learnig from the old world and experiment. Admittedly, Some of the ancient place used to have a story to decipher and to depict by visitor. It is very pleasent and exciting to know about the story is behind every historical place and why this palce builded and how it have been still remain form years. Convresly, since the universality all of cities almost have a smiliar products in shops, foods in the restaurants that not very unique to worth visit.
Another nothworthy point in corroborating my stance is that souvenier aspect. As far as I know and traveled to some ancient place, I can see and buy indeginous clothes, handicraft, food, decorative staff from some local shop around the historical sites. I suppose these local shop would have fiscal, astetic, native material to build handicraft for souvenir application. I can remember a memorable subject about every city that I visit in my house from every travel that it is very invaluable for me. For example, I have a woody status from Gialn city that I bought from a shop nearby to a old village. The native village craved this status from walnut trees that is prevalence in that region.
last but not least, one of the important criteria for select a plaace to visit is the financial aspect. In my point of viewpoint, visiting a historical place is very economic for my budget and income. In another words to say, I can spend a bit money for get ticket and sandiwidh. In contract, in providing going to shop center I encouraged to impulsive purchasing some unnecessary and expensive products. Also, in the restaurant I only order some food without any advantage.
For recapitulate, I strongly inclined to visting a historical palce due to more memorable, interesting, fiscal aspect. The most merit, the cultural and training aspect that it worth visit. I can bring a unique and economic souviner from a city to memorize the travel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, for example, i suppose, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97424892704 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77665155914 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510729613734 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 756.0 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9070193514 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5833333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174870105739 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052153587587 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375277416923 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103223345304 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254939242237 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.