Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every person aims to be successful in life. Success in life is measured based on various parameters. Some people, however, think that to succeed, one needs to be independent, while others argue that success is more achievable as a team. The prompt suggests that we do not belabour this point for too long, stating that "it is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed." In my view, I completely agree with the prompt and opine that to succeed, teamwork is better because it brings diversification, saves time, and improves quality.
First, teamwork contributes to diversity in solutions. When people come together to form a team, they tend to come from different backgrounds and various culture. For example, the biggest bank here in Nigeria - First Bank, started as a group of multicultural individuals. Their various backgrounds and culture shaped their lives in certain ways. Hence, their contribution brought about a variety of solutions to the team and aided the bank's success. This way, the bank was able to attract customers from various backgrounds as well.
Furthermore, teamwork saves time. When working as a team, a division of labour can easily be incorporated. Hence tasks are accomplished speedily and success comes easily. For instance, the construction of the titanic ship could only have been possible with team members. The different task to be done was shared across various team members. Everyone became a specialist in whatever task he has been assigned to do, and hence the titanic ship was speedily delivered.
Of course, some might argue that teamwork might slow down the pace of an individual since he needs to seek the opinion of others in the team. This is not the case. Teamwork helps to ensure that quality in delivery which is also very important to succeed. When working in a team, you get to seek the opinion of others to shape whatever is been given out. This will not be possible in a single-man show.
In conclusion, working as a team comes with great benefits. It gives room for varieties, saves time spent on a task, and improve the overall quality of whatever is been produced. How I wish that the entrepreneurs of today can harness the great benefits of teamwork.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'banks'' or 'bank's'?
Suggestion: banks'; bank's
... of solutions to the team and aided the banks success. This way, the bank was able to...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...n of labour can easily be incorporated. Hence tasks are accomplished speedily and suc...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95744680851 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77128545582 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8869340349 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45833333333 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171218361365 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392287426836 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580873976568 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941128760896 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597463159679 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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