Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
It is generally accepted that people must aware of some events that happen in their surrounding because this matter helps them to improve their situation in society. Some people believe that having information about some significant subjects, which are happening around the world, not also necessary but also vital; nevertheless, it will relatively have several notable effects on our life. However, other people do not think so. On the contrary, it is very difficult for us to prefer one to another because both of them have their advantageous or disadvantageous. As matter of fact, extending knowledge about critical topics is an inseparable part of daily life because of a couple reasons.
In the beginning, one of the primary reasons is that the environment can be protected by some people who have sufficient information about the environment. Several researchers have been discussed that people have extremely influenced on natural by doing some activities such as, cutting trees that lead to global warming, which is introduced as a serious subject. In fact, extending people’s knowledge about adverse global warming effect provides an appropriate ground for decreasing the amount of cutting trees. Moreover, to illustration this matter one need only refer to some parts of Amazon forests that have various types of trees which are cut by people. Some biologists have been discovered that this issue caused to increase the temperature of the earth to two degrees. Hence, people must create a great condition for their environments by not only growing a wide range of trees but also reducing the amount of cutting trees. Hence, people can play a vital role in the environment through their activities.
Second, the most persuasive point is that the economy is a most critical topic that has notable influences on our life. The economy is included a wide range of matters such as the cost of gold, oil, gas, and so on. In addition, some subjects like import and export goods that will have a significant result on improving the condition of people’s economic. In fact, knowing the price of some important articles will support people to obtain more money. For example, if people had enough information about the cost of gold, they would able to predict the price of gold and other essential objects related to it. Given this issue, they will able to know about the price of some articles that will have decreased or increased. So, they will be capable of achieving some benefits via buying and selling some goods. All in all, the economy paves the path for people’s improvement that has adequate information.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is important to aware of some news that has an important role in our life. In contrast, people will able to utilize their ability to improve themselves by their sufficient information about critical matters; therefore, the condition of environment and economy are two serious parameters that we must know about most of them
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in contrast, in fact, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2539.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0983935743 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74981726227 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479919678715 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 809.1 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4307019514 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.409090909 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04545454545 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138331721357 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455403537527 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441652242611 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995767292868 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452481011561 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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