Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
It is usual for people getting knowledge from television and the Internet media. People are debating about whether it is critical to know events happening worldwide even if they will not affect our daily life. Realizing news happening around the world not only provides us various aspects of society but also increase the ability we thinking. I agree with the statement that knowing about the things happen in the world is important because it helps us survive in the competitive society and prevent us from being average.
To begin with, knowing about global events is essential to help us compete with others in the world. Updating new technology and discovery can increase our ability to live in society. For example, Zaha Hadid is famous for using curve and streamline in her architectural projects. She tried to explore the digital of engineering for the future by gaining knowledge worldwide. The projects are located around the globe, and the local engineers have to exchange technology by the internet. Without getting knowledge from the world, they even cannot make the project come true. If we are unconcern of things happening around, we may lose our jobs and fail in the competitive world.
Also, we can stand from others in terms of by personal characters by learning. We are able to present our viewpoints more convincingly by learning current news and knowing various topics in different fields.I often gain knowledge from Discovery and National Geographic channel. This helps me to understand how emergency the nature faces the disaster and to get in the habit of not taking plastic bags and straws in restaurants. Even this habit just starts from my personal behavior, my friends are under my influence don’t make waste for the environment. Also, people can deeper discuss with me about the situation. I gained impression and profession because of the awareness about the world.
It is true that someone will think it is waste of time by getting intelligence of world events. They think that current news will not influence our lives immediately, and we don’t have time to do our jobs or homework. I argue with such statement because although some of the news maybe not happen around us, but it will accumulate and hurt us one day. That’s why keeping ourselves connected with the world events are so important. This can not only helps to expand my views but also keeps communication with various backgrounds person.
To sum up, global events is vital to our social development and personality. It is meaningful that notice the world-changing and current events. Knowing the things happened in the world encourage me to endure in the aggressive society, and prevent us from fall into the average in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2306.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06813186813 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6877386662 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494505494505 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9824896086 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.24 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289500736445 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784959124865 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846539116025 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174537812366 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926800694461 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.