Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours Use spec

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use spec

Having a decent job which can balance both work and personal life has been a great struggle for everyone in this modern life with its galloping progress. People want to have occupation that does not interfere with their family time and other hobbies. As far as the work timing is concerned some are of the opinion that working more hours in one day and having more days off instead is the best option while others believe that they should work less hours a day and more days a week. I-for one- subscribe to the later idea on the ground that working more hours a day can impose more pressure, decrease the one's efficiency, and also they can not spend adequate time with their family.
To begin with, working more hours a day would bring more stress and pressure on the employees. For instance, consider that two people that one of them works ten hours a day for three days a week and the other one works 6 hours a day for five days of a week. It's axiomatic that the employer has the same expectations from both because both of them work 30 hours a week. Therefore, the first person should do the same tasks in less days and there would be a lot more pressure on him.
Second, if people work less hours a day they would have enough time to spend with their family. To be more specific, they would come back home from their work with enough energy and time, for example, to go shopping, to take children to play ground, etc. Moreover, working more hours a day would make people exhausted that even in the off days they tend to stay at home and rest which means they are less likely to have some quality time with their loved ones.
Last but not least, spending too much time at work during a day would deteriorate their efficiency. They would be always tired which brings them less job satisfaction. What is more, this will lead to weaken their chance to be promoted and be successful in their career.
Finally, with all this taken into account, I do believe that working for shorter hours a day and more days a week instead is a much more better option than its opposite. Less work stress, having more time with our loved ones, and be more efficient at work are the most important reasons that I think so. Although, people might enjoy the more off days at the first place, but I am sure that they will appreciate the virtues of less working hours a day after a while.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 445, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...le others believe that they should work less hours a day and more days a week. I-for one- ...
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Line 1, column 445, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...le others believe that they should work less hours a day and more days a week. I-for...
^^^^
Line 2, column 425, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun days is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...irst person should do the same tasks in less days and there would be a lot more pres...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...ressure on him. Second, if people work less hours a day they would have enough time to sp...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ressure on him. Second, if people work less hours a day they would have enough time...
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Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'would' and 'be'.
Suggestion: would always be
...ould deteriorate their efficiency. They would be always tired which brings them less job satisf...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
... and more days a week instead is a much more better option than its opposite. Less work str...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, to begin with, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40318906606 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10945994136 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446469248292 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0587467362 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.705882353 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8235294118 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373705794232 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152867952398 0.076458572812 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095570492087 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248886759622 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105455075405 0.0645574589148 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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