Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In the modern world, people spend a myriad of time working and in order to benefit from it, we should think of what kind of schedule works better for us. Personally, I prefer to work long hours but just three days a week. There are a few reasons for that.
First of all, I have more time to spend with my family. If I have to work five days a week, I come back home tired and the only thing I want to do is to lay down and relax. On the other hand, when I have four days off every week, I have plenty of time and energy to devote it, people, I love. For instance, when I had an office job, I had to wake up early every morning and go to work almost every day. Very often, I felt drained and did not enjoy communicating with others. However, as soon as I took a job in a pharmacy and my schedule changed to just three days a week for twelve hours, I found myself liked it since the days left I was able to take my kids out regularly. In this way, we have visited a myriad of museums and children's entertaining shows. Moreover, now I have free time to meet my friends and relatives, so actively participate in their lives. To that end, now, I am closer to people I love.
Secondly, employees who work only a few days a week are more efficient. When workers have an opportunity to rest before a next workday are more enthusiastic in performing their duties and can benefit a company they work for. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Since I started working a long shift with a few days a week, every time I came back to work rester since during my days off I could sleep long enough to recover. As a result of this, I had a lot of energy to finish all wors tasks in the best way. Furthermore, I was able to introduce myriad ideas of how to improve a work routine. My manager noticed it right away and offered me a higher position. To that end, I was able to excel.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is better to work long hours three days a week than short hours but five days a week. This is because it gives employees more free time improve their relationships with family and friends, and helps them to build a career.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ends, and helps them to build a career.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.12887828162 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34441899651 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505966587112 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0984295367 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6363636364 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0454545455 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369453257795 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103459026434 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888860249548 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24276405853 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271647165997 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.