Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern world, people have a myriad of opportunities to enjoy their lives. Personally, I think that today, people are happier than it was in the past. There are a few reasons why I hold this stance.
First of all, nowadays, we can travel and explore the world in a higher degree than our ancestors did. These days, available education gives people opportunities to excel. A person, who graduated a college has a better job than those who did not go to an institution, and so, he or she is financially superior. An educated individual can afford to travel all around the world. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I am a pharmacist and have a well-paid job, which helps me not only to support my family but also to spend my time off in the way I would like to. Travelling is my passion and every year I have a trip to a new destination. In this way, I have visited many astonishing places and a lot more to come. On the other hand, my parents, who did not have a chance to attend a university and obtain a profession when they were young, did not have extra money to voyage. Moreover, the transportation at their time was not as progressive as it is now. That is why I believe that life is more interesting now than it was before.
Secondly, contemporary technology provides us with tools for communication. The development of the Internet and social networking sites has made it possible for people to stay in touch with those, who are important for them. Facebook, Skype, and Instagram are just a few examples of software applications and websites, which help people to communicate actively. For instance, I have been living in the United States for three years, and although I am on the other end of the planet from my hometown, every day I can talk to my friends and family members through the Internet. Therefore, I participate in their lives constantly. Furthermore, every Christmas and a New Years Eve, I turn on Skype on my computer and suchwise, my family is celebrating with me. It warms my heart and makes me feel great. Conversely, my mother told me, when she was about twenty years old and moved to a big city, she could not have conversations with her parents often because the technology was not as advantageous as it is today. This example illustrates how better life has become.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that these days, people live happier lives in comparison to previous generations. This is because we have a lot of opportunities to explore other cultures and stay in touch with our beloved ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ting now than it was before. Secondly, contemporary technology provides us with...
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...nd stay in touch with our beloved ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62114537445 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85039388314 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537444933921 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5226261901 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.92 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.16 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167132379546 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493150679561 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326521033144 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119261343105 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240476307268 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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