Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The pace of the modern life is fast and very often in order to succeed, people have to work quickly. However, I personally think that it is pivotal do not rush and therefore, minimize the number of mistakes we make. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To start with, mistakes can harm people. Professionals, who work in the healthcare are responsible for their patients' wellbeing and because of this, they have to be careful when they make decisions at a workplace. Otherwise, their patients will suffer. My co-worker`s experience is a compelling example of this. I am a pharmacist and one of my responsibilities is to fill a myriad of prescriptions and to be sure that a right patient receives a right medicine. A few weeks ago, before holidays, my pharmacy was very busy and one of my colleagues was working very fast. In this rush, he got confused and released a drug to a wrong person. Fortunately, the customer noted the error and did not take the pills but returned them to the pharmacy with a complaint. If the patient had taken the medicine, his blood pressure would have increased dramatically and he would have felt terrible. That is why I believe it is crucial to slow down and make things right.
Secondly, by working slowly, people can master their skills. Sometimes we challenge ourselves with arduous tasks, which require a lot of time to obtain great outcomes. When a person is concentrated on only one task, he can learn how to do it perfectly and with no issues. For instance, when I just started prepared for TOEFL test, I made many mistakes while writing essays and had troubles to finish an essay in thirty minutes. However, I did not stress myself but studied slowly and learned every aspect of advanced writing in detail. As a result, after five months of practicing, I was able to reduce immensely the number of my misspellings and was capable of fulfilling an essay in the required time span. This example illustrates my point of view.
In a conclusion, I strongly believe that it is beneficial to work slowly and prevent errors. This is because it can save someone`s life, and will help to excel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...'s life, and will help to excel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i feel, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7277486911 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83396520612 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573298429319 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1605088647 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0909090909 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142106199234 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408233682699 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314653934734 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915887414667 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167755456302 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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