Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personally, I think that the fact that these days preparing food is easier than in the past makes our lives enjoyable. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, modern people are able to save time on cooking and devote it to studying. This is especially important for individuals who have families, jobs, and attend college at the same time. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I am a foreign pharmacist in the United States and in order to obtain a pharmaceutical license in this country I have to pass a number of tests. Therefore I study every day. Not only that, but I have a husband, children, and a fool-time occupation, and I have to prepare dinner every day after work for my family. In this way, when I am shopping for grocery I purchase a myriad of pre-cooked foods, and so every day I can practice for my exams in the morning, go to work, and quickly prepare a supper when I am back home. As a result, my family members are not hungry and my knowledge continuously improve. Although people argue that pre-cooked products are not healthy, they indirectly help me proceed with my career.
Secondly, people are able to enjoy a variety of meals which makes our lives versatile and pleasant. Nowadays, a tremendous amount of products are available in grocery stores and therefore, those who like cooking, are able to try a lot of new recipes. For instance, my family has a tradition to gather for a dinner every Sanday. Each meeting is special for us since we laugh, take pictures and make memories. For these gatherings, I always prepare recipes that I have never made before. Fortunately, a wide selection of vegetables, meats, and fruits on the market provides me with this opportunity. Moreover, I have a great set of kitchen appliances that help me to create new dishes fast and please my beloved ones with delicious meals. If modern appliance had not made cooking simple, I would not have indulged my family and friends with tasty foods often. That is why I think that contemporary cooking is advantageous.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that with the simplicity of cooking, quality of life of my contemporaries has increased. This is because they are able to devote more time to their careers, and because it helps them to connect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., and because it helps them to connect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71078431373 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7551592581 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553921568627 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4502424713 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3636363636 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0986999414724 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303785298754 0.076458572812 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332291383818 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691286509583 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398779756747 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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