Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Companies always want to achieve to their employee's highest performance to make sure that they will complete their projects with the best and accurate results. In this regard, the easiest way is to increase the working time of their workers because the first thing comes to every manager's mind is that if we want to get the most out of our employees, the best is to give more tasks for more working hours. However, this is the most primary solution for the effectiveness of the people and it has some negative consequences like being nervous and tired in the long period of time. I strongly believe that it is more practical and enjoyable to work only three days a week for long hours than to work five days a week for shorter time. To hold my opinion there are reasons noted as below.
To begin with, working in three days makes it possible for you to save four days for other activities or programs. These days people cannot find any fresh air or relaxing ambiance because of the air pollution and the traffic jams, so these four days would be a cure-all for you to rest and prepare for amusement activities. Take my father's experience for instance. He got an unusual disease relating to his inhaling behavior because of the pollution, so he decided to reduce his working time to three days and use the remaining days going to the countryside to just relax. Fortunately, he gained his health after a while thanks to this change.
In addition, if you have extra four days in a week, you can make your time productive by just finding a part-time job or you will be able to start your own private job. Is not it beneficial to make money by some other ways to raise your financial status? It happened to me two years ago when my boss changed our schedule to just come to work for three days and I used this opportunity in a good way by finding a part-time job in the grocery store as a cashier. This helped me to afford all my educational expenses by myself.
Paradoxically, people who works for long hours in three days may get stressed out and feel a lot of pressure to complete works on time. Hence, this drawback may affect their social life and behavior in which some young workers lose their interest to their job or they might react aggressively to their friends as well.
In sum, I find it more enjoyable to work only for three days than to work for five days because you will have more leisure time and also you can raise your budget by working in other jobs. These are the reasons why I posited a supportive notion to this statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'employees the highest'.
Suggestion: employees the highest
...mpanies always want to achieve to their employees highest performance to make sure that they will...
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Line 1, column 565, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ike being nervous and tired in the long period of time. I strongly believe that it is more pra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4678111588 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39328405753 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49356223176 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2209114601 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420455527301 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130007586858 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138314656422 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253040290305 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903985044236 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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