Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It was common among the previous generations to continue their parent’s jobs and benefit from what their parents attempted to create. Therefore, they did not have some problems like facing the difficulties of creating or finding a job. However, this cannot be considered for the present generation because there may be some potential problems relating to this assertion that what happens if the children are not interested in their parent’s job or what if there might be some obstacles to continue it. Therefore, I strongly disagree with this statement that children should choose their parent's jobs. To hold my opinion, there are some reasons stated as follow.
To begin with, as technology grows, new jobs are coming to existence and the job market covers more areas than before. Thus, young people have more interesting choices for their future job selection than before. In this direction, they often find their parent’s job boring and old enough to follow. Take my father for instance, my grandparents lived in the countryside and they raised cattle and crops as the job inherited form their ancestors. My father, on the contrary, selected the different career because on those days the trade of the domestic crops in the nation became popular among young people. Therefore, he selected to be a businessman for their own product.
Second, children should be permitted to choose their own interests freely because this helps them grasp to their job and go for deeper knowledge in that field. In fact, this makes them feel highly motivated to set some higher goals in their future working life. Hence, they will attempt more than usual to get to their goals. Take for example some tough jobs like working as an engineer for welding the underwater canals. If the engineer does not have the motivation to pursue its career, it is extremely difficult to withstand with this condition.
Paradoxically, it is somehow difficult for young people to find a job because they may leave their school without having any qualified license or there may be no vacant job position in their field of study, so they may have to stay even for years to get the relevant job. Therefore, in this case, it is better to follow in the footsteps of their parents when choosing a job. Because children who share similar occupations with their parents can at least inherit the experiences of the parents, which would save much time and energy along the way. For example, a businessman can provide his son a shortcut to success by leaving him an already well-run company.
In sum, I think young people should not take their parent’s career because there are more other fascinating jobs available jobs to take, besides, they should follow their interests to willingly follow their career. Following the job of the parents, however, in some cases as mentioned could be useful. Therefore, upon these reasons I posited a supportive idea about this topic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, in some cases, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2461.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02244897959 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59394819988 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512244897959 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 758.7 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.095352166 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3043478261 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.34782608696 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443868157353 0.236089414692 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142650524004 0.076458572812 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952252116277 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282449783464 0.150856017488 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411159373496 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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