Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the past, people's working schedules were not fixed and were subject to the employers' requirements. With the development of protection on labors, majority of people working nowadays are on a five-day basis with the weekend for rest. Some people believe that working five days a week actually is less pleasant compared to working three days a week with relatively longer working hours. In my point of view, I agree with the opinion and I believe that working three days offer more spare time even though the total working hours are the same.
Surely, some people might hold the view that a five-day working shedule is more beneficial to health. If we consider a standard working shedule of 8 hours per day, the total number of working hours would be 40 hours per week which is around 13.3 hours dividened into 3 days. Indeed, 13.3 hours are considered pretty laborous for most people, which means the time can almost only be allocated for working, eating, and sleeping - these essential daily activities without other recreations. For example, a typical worker in a semiconductor industry working on a two-shift rotating basis. The working time per day is around 12.5 hours per day due to 30 minutes are used for passdown meetings. Plus 2 hours for eating, 8 hours for lunch and 2 hours for transportation, that already exceeds 24 hours. Therefore, it is really arduous if working only three days.
However, working three days a week actually allows workers to rest well. Working three days equals to resting four days. If workers would like to take a rest during off days, four days are really a good choice to plan for relaxing at home or traveling outside. As we know, weekend is usually crowded at many sites such as shopping centers, parks, movie theaters, etc. Therefore, the time used in weekend for recreation is actually less efficient. In contrast, a four-day rest cover two more days in weekdays in addition to weekends, and these two days could be spent for those acitivites at the places that are usually more occupied during weekends. Thus, not only does a four-day rest provide longer period for rest, but it is also more efficient in terms of utilization of time.
In addition, the off-days can also be utilized for other personal activities such as reading, study, etc. If the four-day rest is too long for the worker, let's say, and he or she think the time should be used for other purposes, it fits pretty well because extra time could be allocated for study or gathering with friends besides those time used for rest.
To sum up, even though working three days are more though with less spare time during working days, it actually can be compensated back with the longer off days. With four days to rest, the workers could use them for restoring the energy back or for other personal purpose if they think they already feel a sense of relief.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...for the worker, lets say, and he or she think the time should be used for other purpo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in contrast, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2378.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7847082495 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40777705876 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468812877264 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 715.5 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7786007327 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.090909091 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5909090909 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327443903631 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124425362838 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598872894398 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213097443168 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595037270713 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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