Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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when it comes to the matter of investment by government, though, there is diffrences between invesment on internet access and public transportation. in this regard, some people hold the view that government should investment on public trasportation instead of improving internet access, while others maintain opposite view. as far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I will try to illustrate my reasons as follows.

the first reason that should be stated here is that there are more advantages in investment on public trasportation facilities. a well-designed and managed public trasportatio system could eleminates the traffic congestion. less trafic means less population is air, water and noise. all of these provide a society with physically and mentally lealthey people. furthurmore, a prosprous public trasportation system could save our valuable time, which it usually wasted in heavy traffic. again, a prosprous public trasportation system could save our money, which a huge amount of money consumed on different area such as fuel, health ensurance, and vehicle. finally, a advanced public trasportation system could bring a society with fresh air, less noise and lealthier people.

another subtel point is that the advantages of improving internet state. one of the most significant changes in out life is the use of computers, robat. these two things absoultly need well- conected internet. there will be more innovation, invention and research in different area of science and technology and a massive amount of information can be easily and instantenously obtained through a computer and well-connected internet. as a consequence, the quality and diversity of the accessible internet indicate the level of that country. if one country wants to achieve better recognition in all over the world it must spend more money for improving internet access.

in addition, some people would like to be up to date as a current technology that help to improve the living condition such as machine, robats and so fotrh. agian, aome people would like to aware of alot of things and experience the benefits of livig in the era where there are high level of technology. in short, there is no doubt on that the only way that can access these benefits is through using the internet.

in conclusion, taking all into account, although there are advantages in investing on enhancing the internet access, there are great advantages in investing on public transportation system. so government should consider this as its first priority in inventment on public trasportation system in any scope of investment.

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finally, first, if, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in short, no doubt, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.0752688172 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2239.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39518072289 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99451281215 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2305576736 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.772727273 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227517366568 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634395259184 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049924030968 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121885236501 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533432264841 0.0645574589148 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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