Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “It is more important for students to study art and literature than it is to study math and science.” Provide reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Learning plays an important role in Humans life. Every human being has some goals to achieve and knowledge helps in acquiring special skills to achieve those goals. Achieving goals will bring success to the door, and a person will get more respect and appreciation in society. If considering whether a person should learn art and literature or Science and Mathematics, I would have to say that learning science and Mathematics is better than any other learning.
First, the modern world is the world of technology, and to have a better understanding of it one has to learn about Science and Mathematics. Technology has reduced the distances between us and the world is extremely interconnected. Cell phones, the internet, and airplanes are the advances which we use in our day to day life, these advances would not be possible if students of science and technology did not invent them. I saw the news on television which is a compelling example of this. The plastic used has been increased in our life and it takes millions of years to get it destroyed. Plastic harms the environment, to prevent some people in India created some bricks using plastic and these bricks are used to built roads. As you can see, these people's inventions helped in improving the condition and got an appreciation for this on national television. Science helped in achieving the goal to curb the pollution happening due to the overuse of plastic.
Second, Math and Science are important subjects to learn. Professions like doctors and engineers are really important for keeping people healthy and making their life easier. Doctors, nurses, and medical technicians are all former students of Math and science. For example, my younger sister is going to be a surgeon after studying for 8 years. During these years, she will be studying subjects like biology, anatomy, algebra, etc. These are all Science and Math subjects and necessary for her to study to cure illnesses.
Finally, I feel that Science and Math are important than art and literature. People can live without beauty, the art of a house but not without the house which is built with the help of science and Math.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, as to, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95592286501 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67929527986 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542699724518 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5684290065 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.95 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217076091512 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661172306687 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060719577434 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135339474845 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645946928449 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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