Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern world, internet is one of the most important invention as it connects people from all over the globe. Some people are inclined towards the attitude that government should spend money on public transport, whereas, others hold the opposite perspective. No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of spending on transportation. I personally, though, believe that in order to make our country more successful government should work to improve the internet access at any cost. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons for support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, majority things are based on internet. In universities student can not do any assignment or studies because it all depends on internet. To exemplify, when I was in college and unable to afford the internet facility so I had to sit outside the other dorms to do my homework. It was absolutely a hard time for me. However, the government should make the the internet free at all places including schools, hospitals and gyms. Therefore, this example illustrates the importance of internet.
Secondly, people can live with fewer transport buses or trains. To explain broadly, on internet there are lot of applications that tells the time of the buses their route. So, without wasting our times we can manage avail the facility of public transport more easily with the help of internet. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. When I was accustomed to go in public transport I set my schedule and on time I reached at station to catch my ride but sometimes I travelled all the way standing in bus but it was manageable. Thus, this experience taught me that you can live with fewer and painful public transportation system but not without internet.
In light of the reasons mentioned above, I strongly believe that government should do something to make the internet affordable for every single person. Therefore, I recommend considering these reasons before making a choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97421203438 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80929449018 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56446991404 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5892829018 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3684210526 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266567946116 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758346466905 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482450936919 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154311577258 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509845514535 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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