Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Government holds the responsibility to provide not only the basic amenities but also the advanced technological facilities like the internet. Some may support the fact that the government should spend more on internet facilities as it is a bulletin of resources. However I support the fact that more money is required for public transportation.
First of all, safe and easy access of public transportation is the basic necessity of the well being of people. More money is required for maintaining the quality of the public transport like buses and trains. As they serve as a main mode of commute for students and people who go for work. More vehicles are required to accommodate the growing population. Especially around peak hours, most of the public transport are over crowded which makes it difficult especially for the students and the old people. However if the government provides more fund to increase the number of vehicles, it will benefit most of the population. Most people when they rely on public transport, will not depend on their personal vehicles. This in turn will reduce the traffic and pollution of the environment.
Besides this, there are lot of new public transport modes like mono rails and metro rails which facilitate easy, fastest and convenient commute between places. A clean and fast public transport helps the people to reach their destination of work promptly without delay as the traffic can be considerably less when more people start using the public transportation. The student concession passes provided in my country for the poor students enable many of them to study without worrying about the transportation.
However, with the plenty of resources available in internet, faster access may be beneficial for students to learn online classes, business people to manage their transactions and all the companies to execute their works. In the current era of technology, internet is slowly becoming an essential entity in every household. However, many villages which are devoid of such facilities may require support from the government.
The Government has to allot its budget considering the importance and the need of the hour. I feel though internet access require financial support, public transportation is a basic requirement of the general public and it requires more funding and support from the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, as to, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27320954907 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88916528882 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525198938992 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9351700688 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.631578947 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219331136813 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725832707427 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572944253702 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135523140839 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518196021697 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.