Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes naturally; one cannot learn to be a leader. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From the past, there have been many leaderships which have had profound impact on societies in different fields such as political, economical revolution. Although, some individuals claim that being a successful leadership in inherently, it seems to me that education plays an important role in being a successful leadership for a couple of reasons which will be described in the following.
To begin with, on the of the most important reasons is that there are a plenty of book related to successful people in the market or successful people have written about their personal life and give point to readers for becoming a successful people. For example, Gandhi the leader of Indian people elaborated their life in his book and clearly elucidated their stages of being successful in their Indian revolution. This book not only has provided a dozens of political tips for other leaders, but also thought the characteristic of a successful leader.
Secondly, at the universities professors tech the personality and characteristic of successful an unsuccessful people to student extract a pattern for the reasons of their success. Furthermore, annually a plenty of workshops have run and discussed the failure factors of eminent leader. For example, a year ago at my university at the department of history a workshop with the subject of world war II was run and the characteristic of Hitler and the reasons of his failure was discussed.
Admittedly, there is no doubt that ordinary people with a little intelligence cannot be a successful people. Nevertheless, leaders for their own success need to have a great communication skill. In fact, they need to positively communicate with their followers and teach them about their principle and failure. Furthermore, the history provides a telling example about successful leaders who were educated people.
To sum up, for those reasons I believe that by education a leader can become a success and achieve its goal such as political or economic revolution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: plenty of books
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Suggestion:
...ch as political or economic revolution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, in fact, no doubt, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2298136646 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05807123839 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531055900621 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8376061047 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.538461538 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121171929119 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517654802995 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293448475458 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758849828132 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283982817956 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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