Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Leadership comes naturally one cannot learn to be a leader Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Leadership is an important task because each and every sector of our society needs leader who lead the institution, society as well as country. Leaders are not made they came inherently is the given statement- with this someone would agree, others would not. In my opinion, leaders are not come by natural way rather they are the product of nurture and practice. I think in this way for the following two important reason.

The main reason is that in corporate world where skill is the potent force to become a leader. If you have not job skill then your charisma will not work to get the floor. For example, I was graduated from a reputed university under marketing subject. In our academic life we learnt a lots of theory, explanations regarding our subject. Apart from that, when I joined in a government bank I faced the first thrust because I was fall behind in practical work. During my working time, I saw our manager very closely and dragged out some key features about him. He was an expert regarding his job skill, easily manage others and swiftly communicated with the abroad personnels. He had not acquired those skills inherently rather he got this by practicing. This experience taught me that, the terms to become a leader you must have the required skill on the type of job and practice is the key to gain those skills.

Another reason is that in the field of politics the situation is clearly apparent because the kind of hurdles a particular member bear is truly huge. In this political environment, every step is hard to pass and reaching the culminating point is unimaginable for a hoipoli. To be more specific, in our Bangla textbook, we learn about the arduous career of our father of nation. Bangabandhu was his appellation, he got this nickname not a swift way. In his earlier life he have been bearing many hardship such as, incarceration, different vindication and also separated him from his family. Moreover, he proved himself as a true patriot of our country by showing his empathy, hardship and love to our countrys people. These all are forced us to declare him a leader specifically father of our Bengali nation. As you can see that true leader faces hardship and arduous journey that helps them to reach their career apex.

In conclusion, it is possible for someone to take my opposite side and provide arguments but in long run such position will be withered. Practice and patience not only helps someone in his career goal but also shed a light in our human history. So, the true leadership are always admirable because they came a sour journey and these sours makes the result sweeter.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is the potent force to become a leader. If you have not job skill then your charis...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...rce to become a leader. If you have not job skill then your charisma will not work ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...not a swift way. In his earlier life he have been bearing many hardship such as, inc...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hardship seems to be countable; consider using: 'many hardships'.
Suggestion: many hardships
...n his earlier life he have been bearing many hardship such as, incarceration, different vindi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, apart from, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2176.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76148796499 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56721245652 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562363238512 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8526473499 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0416666667 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29166666667 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122617711886 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339406101108 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341421488246 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075368207427 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452453387745 0.0645574589148 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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