Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, No one can cast doubt on the leading a group, company, system , and so on has a paramount significance in success of a community, the leadership courses are a quite becoming trendy among the academic place such as universities, college, and private academic places; It is my empathetic belief that not without learn a specific courses and receive such experience, no person can be a leader, at least good leader. If I were asked to determine a couple of reasons standing behind of my points of view, I would strongly suggest the leaders who became strong leader by means of both the learning, and the experience of the perfect leadership process into society and own family. I will manifest my reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
It is without an adumbration of doubt the being a naturally leadership notwithstanding, the person require a more sophistication upon details, handling in the perplexing situation. not only is it a tough and burdensome, but demands it more exercise in management approach; Hence, these approaches are obtained by learning from professors regarding to management and leadership such as MBA. My personal experience is compelling evidence of what I mean; when I was working in the automotive sector in L.A, I have seen different people in the head of company, the leadership thereof, they was talented people naturally; rather this position require learning in specific details in order to the person would be more professional leadership, they failed to achieve to such level, thereby passing this position to another leader.
It also goes without declaring that the experience gradually goes people to apogee of leadership gradually; The process of experience after learning the procedure of management play vital role in success of a leaders. to be more specific; the genius president of United state carry out diversity of role in politic and got such experiment to reach to the place of presidency, If he did not need to any experience, he would work in a restaurant now.
it can be summed up in accentuating that the leadership does not come naturally; rather, one can learn to be a leader. My personal belief is human require learning since the the younger stage of life, management as same as human being require to learn and education to be a fertile ground to a success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
...nagement as same as human being require to learn and education to be a fertile ground to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, regarding, so, at least, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02842377261 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97833338681 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524547803618 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.742582905 48.9658058833 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.6 100.406767564 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7 20.6045352989 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193831470019 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822300091425 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507587665876 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12187176909 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524539925565 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 11.7677419355 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 58.1214874552 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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