Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Some people believe that life today is more complex than our grandparents were children, because today, children have to go to school in their an early age, childhood becomes more intricate due to the availability of modern phones and artificial lifestyle. However, I do disagree with and agree with the given prompt which suggests life has become more easier and comfortable today than it was when our grandparents were children for the following reasons.
First of all, today's life is easier than when our parents used to be children because of the availability of modern healthcare, transportation, playground, and Education. For example, today, the mortality rate is significantly lower than when our grandparent's time. Due to the presence of an enhanced healthcare system, people rarely die due to simple communicable diseases like cholera, malaria, and chicken pocks. Since today, the improvement transportation tracks, availability of hospitals, awareness of the importance of health, life has become easier compared to then. In contrast, in our grandparent's time, there were no enough hospitals, doctors, and Education about health, people used to die with simple diseases. There were no transportation facilities, so they used to walk a long distance on foot. Hence, the mortality rate was higher, and due to the availability of transportation, life has become easier in our time.
Second of all, life is easier now than when our grandparents were children because of the development of harvesting technology. For example, I often used to hear from my grandparents that in their childhood, food was not enough. In their time, even if they work for 6 months in a crop field, they used to manage enough food just for three months. However, today, due to the advancement in harvesting technology, people have been producing a lot of food using the least human manpower. Additionally, the primary focus of the people is not just only producing food to run life, they are able to focus on science, philosophy, and other realms of human endeavor. Nevertheless, in our grandparent's time, people used to struggle just only to get food.
In conclusion, I believe, in comparison to our grandparent's time, life today is easier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to go to school in their an early age, childhood becomes more intricate due to ...
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Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...n prompt which suggests life has become more easier and comfortable today than it was when ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e easier in our time. Second of all, life is easier now than when our grandpa...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22562674095 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05371510418 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479108635097 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4195287707 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303906013124 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116682578684 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103837997741 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21512617118 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100111232937 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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