Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today’s progressive world, human life is simple than before, when our parents were kids. Although, most of the sociologist believed that, the people lived in a simple way during last decades, I am on the opposite side which I agree that, today people have lived in a comfortable situation. The reasons of my idea are illustrated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, technology had been developed recently and this make the people communicate with each other easily. To be more specific, when people use technology such as cellphone and social application, they had been connected with each other in the whole world. In this regard, they do not need spend time to go to another place where they can meet.
Furthermore, people can use the application for doing daily work such as shopping, trade, education.
For instance, I had studied in University coincide with working in a company. Some times I could not be on the class at the time of schedule but I could access to power point and other resources which held in online library via my Education application. As a result, these take this opportunity to achieve my goals both in education and career at the same time.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that, nowadays technology and the way of communication make the life easier than past.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ologist believed that, the people lived in a simple way during last decades, I am on the opposi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to spend'?
Suggestion: to spend
...world. In this regard, they do not need spend time to go to another place where they ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85267857143 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75384920199 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6188451695 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8181818182 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152680661878 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582378509065 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434535189612 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784869629977 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455011897943 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ologist believed that, the people lived in a simple way during last decades, I am on the opposi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to spend'?
Suggestion: to spend
...world. In this regard, they do not need spend time to go to another place where they ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85267857143 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75384920199 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6188451695 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8181818182 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152680661878 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582378509065 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434535189612 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784869629977 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455011897943 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.