Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A controversial issue relating to advertisements make the product more attractive or not, has been brought to the attention of public. Relevant authorities believe that products are widely considered to be already appealing and not need a lot of attention. In my opinion, advertisements always make products look good and attractive
First of all, coming with a plan or strategy, advertisements will make merchandise look much better than they are in reality. Not only the advertisements promote a message an idea by putting the item in a proper place and matching the colors, but also, demonstrate a high value of the product. To illustrate, if the advertisement is about to promote an item that is favorable for kids, the designers that work on advertisement industry will make that product not only to give a message but to look attractive on the kid's eyes. Furthermore,the message that the commercial is going to give, it will easily be understand by children. Therefore, that would gravitate them toward the desire to own that product. Overall, according to this practice, advertisements really make products appear nice, neat and desirable.
Second of all, commercial companies are always looking to innovate models that would make their customers to purchase their goods without thinking twice. For example, to be more specific, evidence has shown that product that is advertised, had been sold in matter of days, and even more sometimes those items are not available. If the demand is significantly increased, then it is clear that the advertisement has done its job. The goods are sold. In addition, even though the result those people would get from that item is not going to be at high level, customers will feel good about it. That is why advertisements make the product look in their best state of attraction, so that those could be sold right away.
In conclusion, advertised product should be looked on the public's eye attractive and have a high value. This is because the power of promotion will make items look not only good, but also it will increase their value and that is going to help the increase in sells.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, really, second, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00842696629 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91969891856 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505617977528 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4977508959 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4375 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159876379655 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578148979609 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583232086801 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104663543112 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548512109641 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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