Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I absolutely agree with that statement, because I think most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. I hold this opinion because of several reasons. First, most advertisements make products seem much better because manufacturers and producers of that certain products want to gain more money by showing their products better than original ones. Second, producers want to attract more consumers by making advertisements. Third, also manufacturers and producers prefer to hide defects and weaknesses of their products by making advertisements.
According to my point of view, most advertisements make products seem much better, because producers are willing to get more money by implementing this method. In other words, when a particular commodity exposed by advertisements, it will be more famous and popular, and people being more interested in purchasing that particular commodity. So, popularity of the products results in better selling and more money. Beside, producers prefer to show their products faultless, because they want to meet their goals by applying this way.
On the other hand, producers want to attract more consumers by making advertisements, which influences directly on people's preference and trends. For instance, when I was watching TV about three months ago, I saw an advertisement which was related to cell phone. That advertisement was showing that how a particular cell phone can be useful in many ways, and it has several modern applications that does not exist in other cell phones. Also it's price was so fair, and because of that reason I decided to buy one of them. It indicates that how a simple advertisement can affect people's trends.
Moreover, manufacturers and producers of companies prefer to cover their product's defects and weaknesses by showing them as to products are faultless. To illustrate, a certain company's managers and producers do not want to show their products defects, therefore, they try to make products seem much better than they really are.
Generally, it is undeniable that advertisements have a great impacts on industries, but sometimes it can deceive people when producers are trying to show their products better than they really are.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, third, as to, for instance, i think, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37142857143 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03760915652 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471428571429 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0632932998 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.588235294 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283141784419 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107460929531 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1258411824 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178220519708 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893182173084 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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