Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
influence of advertising on the consumers isnt Negligible and companies use the significant influence to sell more and more their products. advertising contents use Psychological ways to increasing the effect on the weavers. I wholly agree with the idea advertisements make product quality better than they are. among the many reasons one can give for this point, two conspicuous reasons will be elaborate through ensuring lines.
begin with, companies need to introduce their products and they are spending a lot of money every year on advertising. although most things we can see on the tv and on the roadside billboards are advertising. this is because advertising nowadays is one of the ways to the increasing amount of sell of products. for instance, my brother wants to buy a chair for his computer and when I'm asked him why you are decided to buy this chair? he answered me one of the social influencers advertise this chair and the influencer says this chair is a comfortable chair for the game players. in fact, this chair not only has a special property than other chairs but advertising can
show
instinctive than other chairs.
moreover, companies need to introduce their products and they are spending a lot of money every year on advertising. advertising must be shown products With excellent capabilities because consumers want to buy special things. when a product seems an exponential feature, the buyer of the product feels good. for example,big car companies use advertising which has
show
a car
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 250.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.112 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91987944957 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3210571398 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210557387246 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791037280144 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704808453815 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130857169995 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634393626313 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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