Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People are having a hard time reaching on a consensus whether advertisements create products that look more compelling than they are or not. Some people hold conflicting views. Advertisements never give the right things that they show. As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that the actual scenario is opposite most of the time. There are several reasons to support my points of view and I would explore the most important of few of them here. To begin with, the advertisements compa ny show that their products are too good and the price they show is affordable. Indeed, most of the time they provide low quality product and people become confound after seeing the products. My own experience is best evidence what I mean. Few months ago, I had to buy new mobile . As a result, I watched several video of mobile company . Then I was attracted a mobile phone that served me a better performence than others. Therefore, I bought the phone but i was disappointment. The mobile phone did not work properly and after a several days , it could not work on. Based on this point , I realized that advertisements never show the real things and hide their disadvantages sites The second point that comes to mind that they fraud with customers by selling products. To be more exact., the usefulness of products they show on tv is no relation in real life. For instance, my sister is lit bit black in color. That's why she was looking a products that made her more handsome. She purchased a Fair and lovely product from a shop but all her hopes were fell through. After using the product, it brought some negative impacts on her skin like showed pimple. Having said this , however, it is widely admissible that they hold worse than they show. Finally given the factors above. We may reach a conclusion that it is sometimes held opposite characteristics that they broadcast on Tv. Consequently, folks can fall trap easily in their products and they are deceived by them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, however, if, look, may, second, so, then, therefore, for instance, i mean, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7084548105 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67819020999 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588921282799 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6266653045 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4090909091 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5909090909 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176730533127 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450328432159 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394462955333 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176730533127 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.