Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important problems in today’s world will be solved in our lifetime.
Problems, as we all know, is the most controversial debates among people. Although it may seem exaggerated, at first sight, one may find debating about problems sensible. In this regard, many people support this opinion that the most important problems in today`s world will be solved in our lifetime. I believe that many issues will not be consistent over the years because of the experiences we achieved and the improvement the technology endures. I will delve into two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
The first reason that makes me hold the belief that our crucial issues will eliminate overtime is the experience. Although many critics debate that problems like chronic disease will not solve by passaging the time, through experience a person achieves during the illness period, he can remarkably understand how to communicate with it and gain balance. Furthermore, experience considered a factor that can improve the logical power of the mind. The more aged a person, the more experience he has. Therefore, an individual will understand that many problems that intrude on the serenity of a person are not persistent and will obliterate as soon as possible. Based on an experiment which has been done about the stress level of facing difficult situations among people in distinguished ages, results showed that people in middle ages bear less stress than people who are at young ages. The results also admitted that experience is the key factor for exposing to stressful situations.
Another equally noteworthy reason to bear in mind is the development of technology. Regarding the progress in the field of technology, it seems many issues that matter now will be solved in the next decades. For instance, before the invention of transportation means, how crucial problems were solved, such as famine or shortage of medicine that seemed unsolvable and severed? Indeed, improvements in technology bring people to the next era and simultaneously solve many unresolved problems. Moreover, likely, this trend constantly continue. For example, several years ago reported that in a distant tribe in Africa, people were suffering from a rare parasite, and there was no medical help in the surrounding area. Besides, they had suffered from a lack of transportation to convey essential help to them. Undoubtedly, for people, this problem considered huge and intensified until when African scientists, through technological methods, found the solution. Thus, people can trust on technology as a critical element, either.
To summarize, contemplating all remarks, we can safely conclude that both experience and technological developments are critical factors that help crucial today`s life problems had been solved.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2337.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46028037383 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9775156785 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581775700935 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7771707471 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.227272727 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190938418217 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517231607049 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863399418964 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124190214783 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830826322905 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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