Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students can get as many benefits from organization or club activities as they can get from their academic studies.
Nowadays, education plays a dominant role in individuals’ life. The more improvement in technology happens, more scientific growth needed. Although, there is a common-sense which says academic studies not so beneficial as it thought and student can get as many benefits from organization or club activities as they get from their academic studies. I believe that education is one of the most important parts of our lives. In what follows I will delve into my viewpoints.
21st century. We live in an information era which develops more and more every day and its` growth is vehemently fast. How people without enough education can afford to face this kind of world? It seems by the revolutionary inventions new era is about to begin. Although this new period is sure to be more complicated, it will improve scientific discoveries too. As you see, these discoveries and education benefit human beings all around the world.
Although there are lots of clubs which is established based on certain activities such as an athlete, there is a large number of the group created based on educational major. Indeed, educational major gather a large number of different people together. I give you myself as an example, If I had two choices between my sports group and my university club me as an educated person would rather taking part in university club which is relevant to my major. Because I think their knowledge and experience will improve me in my career life as well.
The last but not the least is self-confidence. Not only be in other kinds of clubs not beneficial as much but also don’t give us better self-confidence as we can meet from education at the university. It is true that we spend a lot of time studying and working on scientific projects, but when we see our affords results, especially when it is successful we will feel more confident about ourselves.
To sum up, although a majority of people think to take part in the club is more beneficial than universities, there is a lot of reasons which challenge this acclaim. For example, living in the modern era required us to obtain knowledge. Besides, there is a new period sure to begin which will cause new explorations that could be influential on people lives. Furthermore, taking part in a relevant group to our major will be helpful for our future. Moreover, self-confidence which built by education and university will never replace with anything else.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, kind of, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95133819951 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97168655195 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52798053528 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6582949804 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6818181818 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172332124293 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432027639016 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113045880425 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108070733226 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126142242358 0.0645574589148 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.