Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
the most important investment for a company is to
spend money to improve the work skills of its
employees.
In this day and age of caught-throat competition, searching for the best way of accumulating their profit, companies invest in different things. Meanwhile, an overwhelming majority of the population believe that companies must invest in improving the work skill of employees, others holding different viewpoint states that the money should be allocated to acquiring high-tech machinery. I, personally, utterly agree with the former group for two substantial reasons, on which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, enhancing workers' skills is synonymous with an augmentation of the company's revenue. To be more specific, the main objective of every corporation is earning income, which can be earned by providing services or selling products. In this regard, companies must enhance the quality of their products and services in order to multiply their share of market, which brings them truckloads of money. This goal can be achieved only if workers, who actually make products and services, become so sophisticated to produce more fancy, eye-grabbing commodities. On the other hand, if the company invests in purchasing cutting edge apparatus, nothing will change in the company's income because ill-equipped workers cannot use equipment appropriately. In this vein, it seems vital for companies to set aside monetary resources for educating their employees.
Another noteworthy point is that investing in workers sets the stage for making high-quality products for a long time. To put it in a more vivid picture, from an economical point of view, by one-time training, workers can achieve a comprehensive understanding about how to produce exceptional products. This education will stick on their mind, and there is no need for spending any penny again owing to the fact that when humans use some knowledge every day, they will never forget that as their mother tongue. Moreover, newbies will be educated by present workers, or they will learn about new methods by imitating the others, and this cycle guarantees that all workers will be equipped with new methods and skills everlasting. Mentioned grounds demonstrate that this investment is economically striking.
In conclusion, improving workers' skills is the best investment for a company. This is because not only does this investment bring vast sums of money to the company, but also by one-time investment many workers will be equipped with modern knowledge and skill.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43717277487 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94189245724 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583769633508 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7106758886 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.8125 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213124447434 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818096916186 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589802523509 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156285585256 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579737110491 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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