Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important goal of education is to teach people how to educate themselves.
From a general view, in the recent state of affairs we engaged, it is conspicuously clear that education is a critical and fundamental subject for developing society. Owning to progressive in the knowledge and technology and elaboration new methods for improve education and teaching, we encounter with a lot of strategies for learning. One of the most impressive ways to learning is how someone learns concept automaton without an instructor. We can learn plenty of knowledge, content from intangible material such as nature, daily communication, and others. I definitely agree with this statement that the most significant goal of education is to teach people how to educate themselves. What’s follow I will elaborate my perspective.
in the beginning, Most of us, spended one-fifth of out life as a student and learning at the school and college. Also, some of them want to learn more knowledge and get a upper-level job bu participate in graduate programs such as master and doctorate. While the knowledge in the world is likewise a drop of water compared to the sea. As far as I know, We can obtain knowledge as our capacity and effort. It is impossible to learn all of the material or knowledge in the University, but we have been learned how we can get literacy by own during official education. Moreover, most invention of idea and device have happened at the exterior of the academic environment. My example is compelling evidence for my claim. One of my peers in undergraduate college graduated bachelor's degree and then worked for own company. After four years, I have met him coincidentally and find out he is a successful entrepreneur. He learned a lot of pragmatic techniques and points beyond the assigned course and material during college.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating my stance is that humankind faced and engaged with hectic lifestyle that strapped in time. The course of change in education developed and revolutionized a facile and fiscal way of learning for everyone or even a far-reaching location. We can learn a lot of subject by ourself without special instruction while the lack of time and money. The expense of academic education sometimes is owerhelming for most of the people and maybe not possible for furtehmost corner of world. This condition are inducive for acquire our demands by unconventional way such as experiment, online workshop, reading books, connection to experienced expert etc.
Finally, I believe that some assigned courses eliminate our minds to some narrow knowledge and lead to linear thinking. The learning by ourself based our needs, and interest is more productive and efficient for our mind. In other words, these strategies will be useful to broaden our horizon and may lead to invaluable practical results. For example, I read and learned a bunch of material and courses, books during the whole of my academic education but do not remember even the name of them. However, when I experienced and learned by myself, I think I learned by my heart.
To put in a nutshell, learning by own is more appealing because of a couple of the aforementioned reasons. It is more convenient learning by ourself in terms of financial, time-consuming, and more efficient than conventional way such as official education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... programs such as master and doctorate. While the knowledge in the world is likewise ...
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...y and effort. It is impossible to learn all of the material or knowledge in the University...
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...s, connection to experienced expert etc. Finally, I believe that some assigned co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, incidentally, likewise, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, i think, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2757.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10555555556 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06349081842 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514814814815 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 889.2 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.88513947 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4642857143 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152411153693 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044437611657 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104001561778 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902648031815 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104773185097 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 86.8835125448 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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