Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important goal of education is to teach people how to educate themselves/
When it comes to education, whether is it important to teach people how to educate themselves? Although some believe this is the most important goal, there are still lots of things which are more crucial than this.
It is so argued that people should learn how to find knowledge themselves. Because people will eventually graduate from school, and there will be no one teaching us. Supporters of this argument must be reminded that there are still lots of skills can not be learned individually. For example, if there is not anyone teaching you, it is difficult to learn how to swim, play baseball or tennis. By contrast, educating students how to find a good teacher is way more important. Some sports such as surfing is dangerous. It is better to hire an experienced coach to make sure everything is safe.
Supporters of instructing students how to learn themselves may still argue that it can save lots of money for people for not finding a instructor. The real picture of this statement, however, is that despite students do not have to pay for tuition, they will spend lots of time learning alone. Experienced teacher often know the techniques of how to learn efficiently. For instance, when people learn how to code, it is extremely hard to find where the program is wrong. Nevertheless, an experts can debug the program within a short time and explain it clearly. By comparison, teaching students how to correctly use the knowledge instructors convey is more important. Since, knowing how to implement knowledge means people truly learn it.
Educating students how to learn themselves is not necessarily a cog to make the machine of education run. There are still lots of skills such as finding a good teacher or correctly perform the technique are way more crucial than it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'teaches'.
Suggestion: teaches
...ly. For example, if there is not anyone teaching you, it is difficult to learn how to sw...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ots of money for people for not finding a instructor. The real picture of this st...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an expert' or simply 'experts'?
Suggestion: an expert; experts
...ere the program is wrong. Nevertheless, an experts can debug the program within a short ti...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 669, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e instructors convey is more important. Since, knowing how to implement knowledge mea...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91089108911 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71651847053 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501650165017 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4096993967 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250441687029 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844327370445 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08992753022 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180587348493 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066369166937 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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