Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As the technology blooms, television and movies become one of the means for people to absorb news and events from all over the world. While some may posits it as negative resources as it may influence young people's behaviors, I still hold high evaluation of movies and television since their benefits outweigh the disadvantages. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, news on the television always provides young people with real-life experiences. For example, it's really common for people to see or to hear behaviors like stealing, robbing, sabotaging, are prohibited. Since the right thing and the punishments for bad behavior are often broadcasted, young people are inclined to establish rightness in their mind. Also, the world-wide trend of each walk of life are also on the news. Through obtaining these knowledge, young people are able to make suitable career choices than ever.
Secondly, movies, on the other hand, give youngsters a different viewpoint toward life. Though sci-fi movies and animated movies may seem impossible to encourage people in life, instead, it sometimes spurs people's creativity and motivation to solve real-life problems. Take the movie, the fifth wave, for example. The story is about people manage to communicate with aliens that arrive on the earth. Whereas this may seem impractical for now, it still arise heated debates over the means to talk to foreign lives. The truth is, young people tend to re-create the successful story in the movie, and try to refine their lives using inspiration gained from the movies.
Nevertheless, television and movies may still bring some negative effects toward young people's life. Younger generation sometimes gets too attracted to the sources by staring too long and thus hurt their eye-sight. Also, as the fake news widely spread, the youngsters may not be able to distinguish the news sources, which get them incorrect information. Thus, it is of significance that the youngsters should have self-restraints toward time spent on the sources and the ability to differentiate fake news.
Other than the two disadvantages I've mentioned above, I believe that the benefits of television and movies can help people in multiple ways. Thus, I restate my statement that movies and television have more positive effect on the way young people behave.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, still, thus, whereas, while, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25737265416 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73044685138 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56836461126 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7147393458 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.05 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.65 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23863133121 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759867898842 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915350753574 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152251898752 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856634536128 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.