Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In my country young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young Use reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In my country, young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young. Use reasons and examples to support your answer.

There is a long debate over whether in today’s modern era people enjoyed life more than their parents when they were young. In my opinion, today's young generation have more perks and better life than the previous generation when their parents were young. In the following essay I intend to put forth my arguments to support the view.
In the beginning, advancement in technology makes people lives more, easier which means they have more leisure time. In the past, when our parents were young people do not have advanced technology because of which they work hard. They were not able to enjoy more often. However, at present youth in our country enjoys more time with families and friend because modern technology makes working eaiser. To exemplify, in the past for basic things my parents have to work harder such as if they need to submit any utility bill my father had to wait in line for hours that is why they utilized all time in daily work. However, online facilities have diminish the waiting hour time because of which people save plenty of their time. Therefore, they have more time for their families and friends after working.

In addition, in the present the people are more open to travel worldwide which was not possible for the past generation. Previously, going for vacation in another country or a city seems luxury as it is not affordable for every person. Therefore, the previous generation has not various option for enjoyment in travelling. Nonetheless, today's youth have more opportunities and form of amusement. Travelling from city to city is accessible for everyone so the people can appreciate amazing moments with their loved ones. For instance, I recently traveled to USA with my family for vacation. We visited Florida Disney land and the beaches. It was an amazing trip. My parents were so delighted to see another country as in their time they had not such amusements. This would not have been easy for the previous generation as it is for now for the new youth. Therefore, today's people life are more enjoyable.
In conlusion, I believe that today's youth have better life than the previous generation when their parents were young. This is because, technological advancement provides more leisure time, and because traveling is more easier and fun for this generation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...orth my arguments to support the view. In the beginning, advancement in technolog...
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Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hich means they have more leisure time. In the past, when our parents were young p...
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Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...logy makes working eaiser. To exemplify, in the past for basic things my parents ...
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Line 2, column 646, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'diminished'.
Suggestion: diminished
...y work. However, online facilities have diminish the waiting hour time because of which ...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d friends after working. In addition, in the present the people are more open ...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...njoyable. In conlusion, I believe that todays youth have better life than the previou...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... leisure time, and because traveling is more easier and fun for this generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95103092784 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50109312907 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481958762887 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7932748828 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5217391304 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91304347826 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320189118738 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111494518433 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112060812852 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250252103959 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124231094039 0.0645574589148 192% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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