Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In my country. young people have better lives than their parents had when they were young. Use reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technology advancement in my country is visible to all and sundry, which means children of today's world have access to a lot of enjoyment. In my opinion, I believe young adults live better lives than their parents did when they were young. I feel this way for the following two reasons, which I will discuss in the following essay.
First of all, young adults can now sleep more comfortably than their parents did. Technology has developed varieties of beds with awesome benefits. Examples are Vitafoam and Perfectfoam. Our parents didn't enjoy one-tenth of what young adults enjoy now. For instance, my personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Two months ago, I needed to change my bed because I was always feeling uncomfortable. I got a soft and nice bed at the market that serves the purpose. I related the issue to my father, but he accused me of wasting money. He explained to me that during his own time, he could only sleep on the mat. He always woke up with body pains, which almost led to body paralysis. He wouldn't have suffered that much if a good bed had been provided for him. Young adults nowadays can enjoy their sleep and dreams because cheap beds are ubiquitous.
Furthermore, young adults can now communicate with friends in different countries with the help of the internet. A few years ago, our parents didn't have access to the Internet, but thanks to technology for its provision. For example, if I want to interact with a friend in the USA, it's very easy for me. This is because the Internet has provided platforms, such as Zoom, Facebook, and Twitter. These platforms bring people together without regard to physical appearance. Unlike my father, who couldn't talk to a family friend in the USA for twenty years because there was no internet when he was young. In addition, the use of the internet has highly influenced the way young adults hold their national meetings nowadays. They can easily make use of those platforms instead of traveling around the world and wasting transport fares like our fathers did when they were young.
In conclusion, I strongly believe young adults nowadays enjoy a better life compared to their parents when they were younger. This is because they now have access to good beds and can also speak easily with our friends abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81360201511 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52412554481 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523929471033 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.252131342 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.44 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.88 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303863175645 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818433488711 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875261338593 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216838114727 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636822435748 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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