Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents
experienced when they were young.” Use specific details and examples to
support your answer.
one of the big differences between the two recent generations of humans is the variety in the style they have experienced in their life. One group of people thinks that their grandparents had better and pleasant life than the things people have in the modern era. I firmly believe that today youth have better life rather than all humans in history. In the following paragraphs, I will elucidate my viewpoint.
Firstly, today's people have not any anxiety about their basic needs, and thus life is more comfortable for them rather than their grandparents. In ancient times, humans had many problems with providing their food sources or settlements issues. On the contrary, advances and new technology in agriculture and food sciences, and also developments in architecture and urbanization methods solved many problems related to fundamental issues for all individuals. As a result, people in the past time were always busy finding a peaceful point about their basic needs, and these conditions overshadow their life and had created many barriers to achieve a convenient life.
Secondly, nowadays, all jobs have higher income and less work than careers that peoples did them in the past, and so the new generation experience fewer arduous in their life. In the past time, humans had to do many difficult activities for achieving less money and spent their own life. Vividly, they had to work on their masters' land without any hope for improving their conditions or recreations. on the other hand, young people, in the modern lifestyle, not experience harsh situations to pass their life. Actually, not only can they have a fulfilling and rewarding career, but also they can have many enjoyable and happy times in their life. for example, my grandfather said to me about his hard-working for affording expenses of his family and he never had any leisure time throughout his life. However, all of his offsprings, based on the new lifestyle, have very contentment and joy in their life because of flexible working hours in their jobs.
in conclusion, in the modern era, individuals have a very comfortable lifestyle than their past generations. they have all basic needs and do not worry about them. Additionally, they have better quality in their life because of better and desirable jobs that are easier for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09711286089 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.720396156 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509186351706 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8340711164 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.888888889 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982168965031 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433609521256 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323637293405 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788685871371 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350265198456 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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